Thursday, 2 June 2016

My powerful verb poem

I choose theese poems because they are my favourite hobby to do in my free time and i love the breeze of water and the dust in the air

Paddle,paddle I whispered  in my mind
As this big wave came crashing behind
I sprung up quick with a worry in my mind
I curved into this huge crashing wave behind
Am I dreaming I thought then thumped  on my face 
I hope I have such a magnificent  wave ever again .




Oh how nice it was when I jumped  up quick 
How this wave was so high and thick 
As I curved into this magnificent sight 
I realised it was bigger than high
So I focused hard and fell on my face 



Wow I whispered in my mind 
When I went down this slope that was so high
I hit the ramp at incredible speed 
As I went flying across the sky like a flea 
I thought I would die
So i burst into tears 











    


 

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